Saturday, June 25, 2005

खयालों कि रेत

बेखयाल दिन गुज़ारकर
जब रात कि गलियो मे कदम रखा
तो देखा कि मन कि आंगन मै
रेत पडी थी खयालो कि।
सोचा था उस को जमा करु और
ऎक रेत कि घडि बनाऊ
कि व‍‍‍‍‍क॒त को खयालो कि चलन से हि मेहसूस करू
लेकिन देखो तो,
ये कैसी आंधि हे जो इस दफा आकर
एक पल मे रेत को उडा लेगयी।

रोते रोते वो रेत रात को अलविदा केहकर चलीगयी
मन कि अंधेरे कम॒रो मे एक सऩनाटा उत्ता
ऒर रात भी दिन कि तरह बेखयाल गुज़रा ।

6 Comments:

At 7:02 AM, Blogger Gandaragolaka said...

aah.

I thought I was getting lonely...
Those similies again...
that night again...

superb! We actually need to have Hindi ones like this one... lest one should be forced to believe Hindi is used only for announcements and news.

Also, Chandu, why dont you try Kabir and surdas style language (is it called bhojpuri??)

Kedar.

 
At 1:59 PM, Blogger Sketchy Self said...

aakarsh,
"जहाँ न पहुँचे रिव, वहाँ पहुँचे किव" इस कथन को आज तुमने सार्थक ही नहीं िकया , बल्िक यह सािबत कर िदया िक वह किव हर भाषा में चमक सकता है।

kedar,
i would like to...but i don't really know it...:D

 
At 10:17 PM, Blogger Gandaragolaka said...

typical chandu!
now please dont try to compose one in that style at home tonite!

 
At 10:19 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

yes... jahan i can't get to is where i realize u might be there.

ravi not the kavi ;)

 
At 11:04 PM, Blogger Aakarsh said...

chandu,

jahan na jaaye kavi wahaan jaave Anubhavi...jo main nahi hoon..
bus ek talaash hain!!

 
At 7:20 AM, Blogger Sketchy Self said...

i guess it's too late to say that the ravi pun was unintended...

 

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